Since I had no internet while I was off galavanting about in the Caribbean, I couldn't post any blog updates. I did, however, write some up anyway. Here's what I would have posted over the past few days!
Blog post for July 3- Nassau.
I feel like I'm in Jamaica, or at least a place that wants you to think you are in Jamaica. I am on a beach so I am happy. Water here is beautiful and I'm watching my kids build a sandcastle. By kids I mean the two I gave birth to and my hubby The castle is huge. I'll post up a picture of it eventually.
July 5th
St Thomas- US Virgin Islands.
Just got done with parasailing. Both hubby and daughter got seasick and puked. They both headed back to the cabin-done for the day (it's 3:30 in the afternoon). My son wants to call his girlfriend. Must be time for savage to find a bar...
Found local bar. It's been damn fun. Hanging out with a group of locals in a little hut bar called the Pegleg Bar. Kaz us the bartender and she rocks. Definitely worth the stop if you ever find yourself in the US Virgin Islands. I've heard some very interesting stories, and seen pics of a ferry boat someone apparently 'landed' on a pile if rocks. Someone needs some driving lessons, that's all I'm saying about that. The rum punches are awesome and great price. I'm a happy savage.
July 6
Went snorkeling at St Maarten. It was very cool, but I am now sunburned pretty bad. Not sure I'd I will be able to sit tomorrow!! Fun Latin party on the ship tonight.
July 8
Still suffering with the sunburn, but finding it hard to care too much, since someone keeps bringing me fresh piña coladas. I am currently sitting in the shade and working on the next UC chapter. It's about time for lunch, so I'll probably take a break from taking a break here soon. I shall be back in Florida tomorrow morning, and back home tomorrow night!
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I'll post some more later. Maybe even a few pictures. :)
Yay!
ReplyDeleteNope...Austenbrontemeyer said:
We missed you and now maybe Icy will behave but I doubt it...Go ahead, ask her how it was that she found herself outside her home sans husband, at 2am without her keeeeyyyss...
It was getting reeeeeaaaaalllly boring around here.
To keep busy and make up for all that extra time at the lack of your prolific writing schedule, over my own vacation:
Began 8 new fics-Jeez, currently cannot for the life of me, keep their story lines separate in my brain, eeeeks. Your fault entirely.
Started to refinish the woodwork around the house myself after the guy I hired used LIQUID stripper on my 100 yr old trim, grrr...
AND... last but not least YES, I painted my tackroom-
a VERY lovely and respectable, deep pink I might add, although there are those of the male persuasion
(though not all :) a few absolutely love it)
who use that tackroom daily who are grumbling and not very happy with me at the moment. Suck it up people!
I am now consequently exhausted and have to go back to the real job and office with stubborn pink flecks under my nails which absolutely refuse to be removed per my equally lovely and now former manicurist and friend, Shelli. I said suck it up people!
Did I say grouchy as well? Yeah.
All that time on my hands, your fault, Missy.
Happy you had fun and are safely home, you were missed :)
The first night Edward and Angela, extended version (with deleted scenes)
ReplyDeleteObviously Edward is too sad and heartbroken for what he is about to do, and what he is doing do to his wife, his love, his life, so he cant get it up. He askes angela to stoke him so he can get some friction and get aroused. In th mean time angela is a virgin, too tight and dry to penetrtate, so Edward will return the favour by stroking her down there untill she losens up and gets wet. Then they are both aroused, Edward starts pushing but cant go too far because Angela is to tight. Edward the gentleman is too gentle with her, pushes slowly until he penetrates to the hilt and asks angela if she is ok. After, he starts thrusting in and out but cant resist too long since she is too tight. He spills every drop of his seed with a loud groan. Then he pulls out, covered in his seed, Angela's juices and her virgin blood. They clean up and Edward thanks Angela for the service to the Kingdom, but he is too coward to get back to his generous, selfless, naive wife, so he falls asleep. He wakes up sometime later and is aroused of dreaming having sex with somebody, whos face looks sometimes like Anglea's, sometimes like Bella's. Anyway, he is hard and he asks Angela if she is too sore to have another round, to make sure she gets pregnanat soon. She says sure (actually she liked his cock the first time, he is a fine handsome man afterall). They do it again, Edward goes longer this time and after he pours inside her again falls exhausted on top of her and sleeps like dead. He wakes up sometime later when the sun is high in the sky. Now he has to get to his wife, have her bath him and shave him. Damn, he doesnt have the energy to take her to bed too. The night has been to intense, he has to talk to Carlise and the court about his first night and make sure they are ok with it. Suddenly is dark outside again, soon he has to go to angela who is waiting with anticipation, first time was fine, second was better, third will be even better...well afterall everything is for the benefit of the Kindom. Poor poor Edward what a sacriface he is making......Viva la Forks.... to be continued....
oh I forgot to elaborate when Edward returns to Bella after making Angela wet, deflouring her and thrusting into her tight little pussy. He cant bring himself to look his wife into her eyes. But Bella cant stay there and see her husband nearly destroyed for enduring the torture to bring hismelf to orgasm and spill inside her best friends pussy for the benefit of the Kindom. As the future Queen of Forks would do her duty, she wraps her arms around Edward's head and tells him how proud she is that he might actually have conceived the future heir of Forks. Now she is certain that whatever happened in the room on the other side of the castle, Edward will always be hers. She cradles his head above her heart and tells him she loves him more now than before and she cant wait for tonight until Edward goes to Angela again to inrtrease the chances of having the golden heir of forks. To make sure and be on the safe side, she actually will try to convince Edward to hav 3-4 sons with Angela, so the Kingdom is saved and they can all live like a big happy family. Angela can stay there, and Edward couldnt thank her enough for giving him his sons, so he might reward her once in a while...wink:) He knows his wondeful wife will be very understanding.....afterall everything is for the benefit of Forks and its people....Long live the Queen of Forks.....to be continued...
ReplyDeletecontinued......Edward angela second night.....
ReplyDeleteEdward enters the room where Angela is waiting for him naked in the center of the huge bed. He is taken in surprise and feels his cock give an appreciative nod. Damn, it wasnt supposed to be like that, he wasnt supposed to get turned on by another woamn but his sweet innocent beautiful wife. No God, no, dont let angela's perfect tits make me want to fuck her little sweet pussy. He approached the bed and positions himself between her legs, the faster he goes the better it is, the sooner he will finish. He thrusts with a sharp motion and they both moan loudly. He starts pushing in and out none to gentle. God, Angela is meeting his every thrust eagerly. This makes everything complicated. She starts moaning "my lord, please please dont stop, oh it feels so good..ahhhhh". Edward feels so turned on that he forgets about the guilt eating him alive. This is too good to avoid, and since angela is doing such a great service to the Kindom, he thinks to give her some pleasure...well deserved. Well he never will tell this to his naive beautiful wife, she needn't know about this. yes he promissed to not give angela pleasure, but it is impossible, he is a man afterall, and a fine sexy one...he cant blame angela for wanting to experience the first sexual pleasure with a man. So he grabs her nipple with one hand and rubs her clit with the other, that takes Angela over the edge, she comes so hard that milks Edward's cock so tightly than he cant contain himself anomore. He pours indise of her, filling her like he never thought he would another woman. They collaps all spent and covered in sweat and cum. Once they come back to earth angela asks if they can do it again, and since it is still early in the night Edward agrees. They end up doing it 5 times that night untill Edward is dry and have no more seed left in him. Angela falls asleep not wanting to clean herself of the cum which possibly contains the initiation of the great future child king. Edward crowls off the bed exchausted, enters the room Bella is waiting with a smile on her beautiful face. He feels really bad about it, she is so beautiful and trusting and innocent. He breaks down on his knees asking forgiveness and tellingn her how much he loves her and only her regardless of what is happening on the other side of the castle. Bella crushes him to her heart and leads him to the bathing place where she has prepared everything to wash him from Angela's juices and smell. This goes on and on every night, sometimes during the day too, where Edward and Angela cant wait until the night falls...afterall who blames them...they all are performing their duty and showing their loyalty to the Kngdom. After sometime Edward feels better about this and angela starts glowing. Who said he would enjoy sex with another woman other than his beautiful sweet Bella? That, he didn predict, like anything else he wast able to predict. But hey he is Edward, the future king of forks, he will think of something immediately, no matter what the cost. Now if his sexy angela could make a baby for his sweet, lovely wife. This would be his gift to her and in the eyes of God would forget the sin of actually enjoying sex with angela. If angela doesnt get pregnant in the next 6 months, he might just beg Aro and Carlise for an extention..perhaps another 6 months? Looks good and promissing.
that just toally made me throw up in my mouth! Just like we all thought it would
ReplyDeletefuck!
if Savage goes that route, this is totally how she should go about it, otherwise if she downplays it, it would be a big lie. You wanted angst? Well give us the fucking angst then. Game on!
ReplyDeleteSeriously, give it a rest on telling Savage how she should write what is HER story, or at least quit clogging up her blog posts with these pretend excerpts. There's threads elsewhere for that.
ReplyDelete@anon above
ReplyDeletethis pretended excerpts? why if she can write her fanfic so can we..are you gonna stop us? nah. Well if it hurts to read our version of events, then either stop reading them or wait untill its finished...fair enough?
wellcome back fro your vocation! I'm glad you had a good time. I've been in cruizer twice here in brasil and I'll probably go again. it's our favourite kind of vocation. I'd love to see some pictures.
ReplyDeletekikabr
Savage,
ReplyDeleteWow, you have truly ruined this story for us. I honestly didn't think it was possible. We all loved it so much and I personally was ready to put it in my top 5 all time favorites with the likes of EP and Wide Awake, and now that will never happen. No matter what you do from here on out, you've ruined these characters and our perception of them. Even if you do what EVERYONE is hoping for and not have Edward become an adulterer, you've put the idea in our heads. You had him actually agree to do it. You've had Bella become a meek, simple-minded drone that will do whatever she is told. But I honestly don't think you are going to stop it from happening, are you? I think you're planning on having Edward have sex with Angela. Won't that be a joy for us all to read? *heavy sarcasm* Of course we won't have to read what actually happens when they're in bed together which kind of makes it worse actually. Wait, I'm sure we'll get a wonderful scene of Edward coming to Bella crying about having to pound the hell out of Angela and she'll be so loving and understanding. I'm sure she'll tell him how proud of him she is and how brave he's being. It honestly makes me physically ill to think about it.
I honestly don't mind the UC commentary at all (I was just telling someone if it was April 1st, I'd copy-paste the alternate version of it into FFN, add a little dialog and post it as the next chapter). It would be nice if you would keep it where it makes sense - either as a comment to a post about UC, or on the UC page - whatever you prefer. It just confuses me in a comment about para-sailing and snorkeling. :)
ReplyDeleteDear Savage, no its not April 1st, its reality as it should be. We would appreciate it if you actually keep it real after what you are going to do next chapter. As for the alternative version, leave it to us. We have a creative mind too. Glad to see we can help. Sorry for posting here, will copy and paste on the UC page. Have a nice time back home, hope you had a relaxing vacation, stress and fatigue do weird things:)
ReplyDeleteSavage,
ReplyDeleteWow, you have truly ruined this story for us. I honestly didn't think it was possible. We all loved it so much and I personally was ready to put it in my top 5 all time favorites with the likes of EP and Wide Awake, and now that will never happen. No matter what you do from here on out, you've ruined these characters and our perception of them. Even if you do what EVERYONE is hoping for and not have Edward become an adulterer, you've put the idea in our heads. You had him actually agree to do it. You've had Bella become a meek, simple-minded drone that will do whatever she is told. But I honestly don't think you are going to stop it from happening, are you? I think you're planning on having Edward have sex with Angela. Won't that be a joy for us all to read? *heavy sarcasm* Of course we won't have to read what actually happens when they're in bed together which kind of makes it worse actually. Wait, I'm sure we'll get a wonderful scene of Edward coming to Bella crying about having to pound the hell out of Angela and she'll be so loving and understanding. I'm sure she'll tell him how proud of him she is and how brave he's being. It honestly makes me physically ill to think about it.
Yay!
ReplyDeleteNope...Austenbrontemeyer said:
We missed you and now maybe Icy will behave but I doubt it...Go ahead, ask her how it was that she found herself outside her home sans husband, at 2am without her keeeeyyyss...
It was getting reeeeeaaaaalllly boring around here.
To keep busy and make up for all that extra time at the lack of your prolific writing schedule, over my own vacation:
Began 8 new fics-Jeez, currently cannot for the life of me, keep their story lines separate in my brain, eeeeks. Your fault entirely.
Started to refinish the woodwork around the house myself after the guy I hired used LIQUID stripper on my 100 yr old trim, grrr...
AND... last but not least YES, I painted my tackroom-
a VERY lovely and respectable, deep pink I might add, although there are those of the male persuasion
(though not all :) a few absolutely love it)
who use that tackroom daily who are grumbling and not very happy with me at the moment. Suck it up people!
I am now consequently exhausted and have to go back to the real job and office with stubborn pink flecks under my nails which absolutely refuse to be removed per my equally lovely and now former manicurist and friend, Shelli. I said suck it up people!
Did I say grouchy as well? Yeah.
All that time on my hands, your fault, Missy.
Happy you had fun and are safely home, you were missed :)
I disagree
ReplyDeleteI couldn't disagree more. The story is FARRR from ruined! One thing Savage has always been up front about is that her writing isn't traditional in the sense that everything will be rainbows and sunshine. Her blog is title: FICTION WITH TEETH. However angsty or non-traditional her writing is, one thing I never am at the end of her stories is DISAPPOINTED.
ReplyDeletePerhaps the thing to do at this point is to take a GIANT leap back and remember this is Fiction. She's not posting someone's real life affairs. I get that folks are emotionally invested, but sometimes it's taken to far.
Savage does this for free bc it's what SHE enjoys. She gets no royalties...you didn't pay anything to read. So do what I do at the Barnes and Noble when I pick up a book and read the synopsis and don't like what I read: I put it down and WALK AWAY! I don't take the time to send the author a nasty gram letting them know their story was ruined because of a plot point.
Austenbrontemeyer said:
ReplyDeleteAre you insane?
Or 12?
Put on your big girl panties,
hurry down to your local bookstore or library and
pick up a copy of anything in the
"hearts and flowers" section or
better yet anything in the childrens section,
both classifications making up about 7% of everything in print.
This would be best as surely the remainder comprises everything well over your head. This fic is a period piece and if you do not believe this kind of thing went on daily and much worse as far as women were concerned, you are misinformed.
Belittling an excellent author who writes for you free of charge, and on her own time is unacceptable, not thinking before you spew trash on this public forum purely for your own gratification which the rest of us have to read is infantile.
Run along now, your Mommy is calling and it is past your curfew.
*heavy sarcasm*
*Cue twilight zone music, du du du du...du du du du*
ReplyDeleteEwwwww....Creepy stalker.
ABM was right, she must be 12 (and insane).
Dear Austenbrontemeyer,
ReplyDeletePlease refer to Amendment #1 in our Nations Constitution.
Yes, this is a historical
Yeah and she can't even spell. Christ I stopped counting her errors after like 52 in one post.
ReplyDeleteIs she trying to make it look like more than one person wrote all of that tripe?
Mirror check AND spell check. Wait... is this person trying to force you to change your next ch?
Hmmmm, I kinda like the threesome idea, tastefully done. Eveyzone csuld tiste eveyzane!
(thats "everyone could taste everyone', in translation for those of us who CAN read and WRITE.)
What a Freakazoid that one.
are you people crazy?
ReplyDeletethis just a story. savage can write what she wants.
we can read what we want.
can you guess who is getting the last laugh here?
we're all fools.
Lets see? When we write a fanfic we post it on our own page, not in someone elses blog space. We want to read Savages story not yours so go elsewhere. If u want to write then post your own story somewhere else, preferably in the teen space where you belong, that way you can stomp your feet and pull out your hair too!
ReplyDeleteAlthough yours is guaranteed not to be read past the first sentence.
Zoom, right over her head. You missed it moron, April 1st is April FOOLS day, a day for people-just-like-you.
ReplyDeleteI wrote it here because I was so inspired by this story so that i decided to do a spin off. if you are bothered frrom the paiful truth of the turn of events, just run along, skip or wait until i finish it. This is intrnet, I will post it wherever I want. Savage is a big girl, a fiesty one too, she can defend herself, thats why love her..hehehe. now im going to go write some more, maybe from that hypocrite Esme's POV? hmmmm cant keep myself from writing...great story!
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, sounds like you had a ton of fun and relaxing on your vacation. Being a mother you really deserve it!!!! Please post pictures as I love to see places that I haven't been...yet . :0)
ReplyDeleteFor all the negative feed back: Get a fucking grip people. She can post/write anything she wants. We have a right not to read it if we find we don't like whats written.
Oh, please, I get so carried away when i write that i dont mind my spelling. Obviously i need a good Beta, any recs? But honestly tell me how many times did you red my posts? you counted my misakes? lol. Im loving it when i get you people so affected. I welcome the negative posts too, helps me with improving my writing. Rest assured, in no way am I trying to change Savage's mind for the next chapter. No, way! Are you kdding me? If Edward doesnt screw Angela then I'll have no story to tell. And it is only fair you know it from Edward's or an outsider's POV too, since all you will get i the seet and smooth BOV. It is how it would have happened in that time. Now, I never forced anybody to read. Just skip and dont protest too much.Off to read Offside...it updated yaaaaaay!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHere's the sad thing about those excerpts, I AM not reading them. I only have to see the first line and already know what the entire rest of the paragraph is without having to read on, because, as I said earlier, her previous blog post is chuck full of them. (Again, why people are posting all of this to her blog where she talks about things besides UC instead of in actual reviews on fanfiction.net or better yet a Twilighted thread is questionable, but whatever; to each his own). Even so, I could pose the same question to you; you asked me why I'm reading your "fanfiction" excerpts of Savage's fanfiction story if I don't like them? Well, if you think that your excerpts are the direction Savage is going and you don't like it, why are you even writing these excerpts? And honestly, I doubt it's really needed. I think by this point, people have made it pretty clear that they don't like the decision of the story's direction. If you doubt that, just take a quick (and I mean really quick, there's so many that it won't take long to figure out the general consensus) peek at the comments page to her previous blog post.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed being down here in the Caribbean!
ReplyDeletePut cold aloe cream on your sunburn :)
-acydrose
Oh no. You totally misread my intentions here. I would be so pissed off if Savage changed her mind..so pissed off. Im having so much fun. What is it with you people? You protest too much. You protest if Edward fucks Anglela, and you equally protest if Edward doesnt do it. And by the way, do you really live in Savage's mind? Who knows what she will do with her story. So i picked my direction. I hope she goes with Angela and Edward formnicating and procreating. Its so damn hot, I cant contain myself from telling the story from their point of view, as it should really be told. Come on people, arent you a bit curious what might be going in Edward's and Angla's mind s tome passes by? Again, if its too much, please feel free to skip and dont waste your time to comment. Savy likes my ff, she was going to post it on ff.net on April first...lol...too bad she has to wait like 9 months:P
ReplyDeleteAh, our First Amendment. After 32 years I may have a bit more to offer concerning the referenced legislation and humbly offer it here.
ReplyDelete1st Amendment Legislation specifically refers to the restriction of the U.S. government to create laws restricting freedom of the press, create laws restricting religion, create laws restricting the right to petition and creating laws restricting free speech. With regard to specific suits filed, it is the responsibility of the Supreme Court to interpret this legislation with regard to suits brought thereby creating Precedent for Lower Courts to then review and utilize in determination of legal decisions concerning suits brought.
With reference to today’s subject of discussion, existing precedent of HM v. Falwell, 485 U.S. 46 additionally effectively extended liability of the "actual malice" standard to “intentional infliction of emotional distress”, thereby releasing resulting suits for libel for trial.
This forum is considered public. Arguably, certain comments here could be said to inflict emotional distress thereby opening up the writer to possible legal action.
Constitutional implications aside and in common speak:
While it is always expected that a review may not be positive because some will always disagree, the offering of differing viewpoints is welcomed and encouraged in this country in order to create healthy discussion. There is a clear and defining chasm between legitimate reviewing or journalistic editing through the voicing of factual legitimate opinion and “actual Malice”. I spend my days sweeping away accumulated sand between the two which is most often the result of the combined erosion of professionalism, factual research and common courtesy.
Yes we do have the choice to stop reading anything we do not agree with, similarly we can turn off the TV or Computer to, in effect, walk away from a Bully forcing his opinions on others.
Which causes the most harm I wonder.
ABM
Is it cocktail hour yet?
O.o_/__/\_
Well spoken, "Nasty Gram" indeed.
ReplyDeleteHuh?
ReplyDelete*Snicker*
ReplyDeletelol...nobody is bullying here. Its that this story is so good that people have their opinion and sometimes a vivid imagination. Is there any indication to force you into reading and affect your opinion? NO! This blog is open. I read tons of reviews and nothing can change my opinion. This story can go so many ways...come on..humor up pople, its fun!
ReplyDeleteSavage, you are a big girl, this is your blog, you have all the right to push that delete buton. I started this as fun, sorry if i somehow offended you, but people are so sensitive, and protective of their beliefs. come on...bullying is so high school. Cheer up people..nah, im out....im so touched...lol.
I haven't seen anything I care to delete yet. Let's be nice, though. :)
ReplyDeleteSavy,
ReplyDeleteI swear to God I started this as fun, I even posted the Esme's POV in your most recent thread becase you mentioned UC there. Since you are telling it in BPOV, i totally had some visions of how Edward would proceed with this unfortunate turn of events (because it is...big sigh). Now, he is my Edward as I want him to totally be. Your Edward might not be the same as mine, but i got a feeling mine rules:P....so sue me for wanting some Edward and Angela action...lol. You know what they say, if you are upset about something, just try to overcome it with humor and a big can of nutela. This is like some kind of therapy for me...fucking sue me again:P. But I swear to you I will stop...for a while at least:)
Not bothering me in the least. :) If you start talking smack about Nutella being the nectar of the gods or something, then I'll gt pissed... lol
ReplyDeleteActually I dont like nutela, I try to heal my broken heart with hard liquor, like vodka on the rocks...dry (got i dont know why dry sweem so naughty word...lol).....no sugar can help me, just alchool can do strange things to my brain...like I totally had a vision of the first unfortunate pro-hair-creating night in Angela's POV .......but I wont post it, not now at last. I dont want people to start searching the Bible for ways to show me how to wash my sins. Let alone get them into the international law to get me arrested for having erotic dreams about your characters:P...God No! And with that, have a good night my dear...and....hmmmm......well im not saying it, i dont want to force upon anything:P
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