Well, it's a little early, but since you may have a bit of a wait for the last of Surviving Bella, I thought I would go ahead and get this one underway. Hope you like it!
Please don't make Bella a doormat even though she is 'just' a handmaid in this story. She sounds like one in this first chapter. Though I have faith in your storyline and hopefully she won't continue to be used like a pawn in later chapters.
Please don't make Bella a doormat even though she is 'just' a handmaid in this story. She sounds like one in this first chapter. Though I have faith in your storyline and hopefully she won't continue to be used like a pawn in later chapters.
Loved it! I always love your stories but this one, a period piece, my favorite! I love the lords and knights!! I am excited!!!
ReplyDeleteI love it. Just the first Chapter and I have now read it twice! Love the idea of Edward being a knight. Can't wait for the next chapter.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely loved it!
ReplyDeletePlease don't make Bella a doormat even though she is 'just' a handmaid in this story. She sounds like one in this first chapter. Though I have faith in your storyline and hopefully she won't continue to be used like a pawn in later chapters.
ReplyDeletePlease don't make Bella a doormat even though she is 'just' a handmaid in this story. She sounds like one in this first chapter. Though I have faith in your storyline and hopefully she won't continue to be used like a pawn in later chapters.
ReplyDeleteI love it. Just the first Chapter and I have now read it twice! Love the idea of Edward being a knight. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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