11.30.2010

Surviving Bella - last chapter

Well, the last full chapter is up now. It's kind of hard to believe! It's been quite a little raft ride! I hope everyone appreciates the ending. I must admit, it took me a long time to get it right, and I completely re-wrote the chapter about three times before deciding on the final version. I'm happy with the results - I hope everyone else is, too.

4 comments:

  1. I loved it, Savage! It was perfect the way it ended. I think the story would have fizzled if you had kept going. Now that they're off the island and committed to giving their relationship a real chance it's the right place to stop. Personally, I don't need everything spelled out for me in terms of their future. Wonderful chapter.
    Sincerely, Sheviking

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  2. the site is down for me for some reason :(.... oh woe is me

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  3. Thank you for a beautiful story. Love the last chapter so much. It gives me hope that they will make it together.

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  4. It was perfect! And thank you for putting so much time into it. :)

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