9.07.2011

Tuesday Teaser, Once Removed - UC Chapter 30

Ah, what the heck.  Here's a teaser for ya:

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“Edward!” I yelled out again, and I saw his shoulder’s tense as his eyes flicked to me briefly.  

He did not halt in his movements.

The rope was tied around Jane’s other leg and then around her waist as she was strapped to the dummy.  I could hear her cries and pleas as well as the smacking sound of Edward’s hand across her mouth.  There was blood on her lips as he wrapped the rope around her again.

I struggled against Sir Emmett’s grip, and just when I thought I would wriggle from his grasp, there were other hands on me, pulling me slightly backwards.  Seth moved in front of me, trying to block my view.

“Let me go!” I cried out again, pushing against the strong arms of the soldiers around me.

“Please, Queen Isabella,” Seth’s voice pleaded with me.

Edward’s hand flew around rapidly as he wound the rope around Jane’s form, further securing her as she cried for mercy.  He yanked roughly at the binds, and then turned to walk several feet away to a large stack of firewood, stacked for the winter.

He piled it at her feet.

“No!  Edward, please!” I screamed, but he would not even turn to face me.
 
Jane, however, did look to me.

“Lady Isabella!” she cried out.  “I did not know – I swear I did not!  Please!  Please!”

Edward signaled one of the other guards, and a moment later he held a brightly burning torch in his hands.  He moved close to her, and I could hear her pleading with him.  His chest rose and fell with his breath, his eyes narrowed, and he dropped the torch into the dry wood at her feet. 

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24 comments:

  1. Yes! I cannot wait for this update!!! <3

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  2. I caaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan't wait.

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  3. FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU*C!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DAMN!! I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  4. Oh, no.  I hope she told them who told her about the tea.  :(  Hopefully Edward will save her but I have a feeling that he may be making an example out of Jane.  So sad.  Thanks for the teaser. 

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  5. oh shittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt omg , thank you thank you thank yoouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu, I was this close to just give up and go to bed :D was it the Puss in boots look?!!! :)) because I'll give you more of that look if it gets me a teaser everytime :)))) yeah well I'm a sucker , L O V E you

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  6. WHOA! Can't wait to read. . . .

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  7. Oh dear...after my "off with their heads" review from the last chapter it came to my mind that maybe *just maybe*, Jane was just a pawn in Aro's evil plans and really didn't know that the tea was the cause of Bella's infertility.
    But if burning at the stake is her fate, what the heck did Edward do to Aro?!? :-o

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  8. Woah.

    That is all I can say.

    I'm guessing that the burning to the stake death is because it was a witch's potion, and Edward is assuming that Jane is the witch in this case. However, I strongly believe that she was innocent, and I fear the effect that her death sentence may have on Isabella and Edward's relationship. I don't think Isabella is going to be forgiving on this matter.

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  9. this is the most intese teaser of all...poor Bella..i can see problems between her and Edward are on the way..separation even..i can tell she will not have the heart to forgive his cruel action..even if he was hurt immensly..well..i cant wait to see..please Savage..please try to update ASAP..maybe today..ehm..ehm..i know i am asking for much..but i could not help it:(

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  10. OMFG!
    sAVAGEEEEEEEEEE!
    I can't wait to read that chapter.

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  11. You know...I don't think Jane knew either. I thought of that when reading the last chapter.  Just because of the way she was when Bella said she was her friend.  I don't think Bella is going to forgive Edward very easily either.  He is going with his rage right now and not thinking but that is how he is.  He reacts first thinks later.  Yes so what has happened
    with ARo and Jessica  Hope we don't have to wait too long Shay!!!

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  12. Really intense, but this is not going to solve enything untill Edward understands that a big part of all this fuckey is HIM and his irresponsible actions, HIS stupidity for not suspecting anything and anybody. He may kill Jane and all Volterra, but that doesnt mean he can live in peace and consider himself redeemed. JMO

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  13. I know Edward is in a rage and rightly so, but I feel that Jane was innocent. Perhaps she was giving Bella the tea under dress with Jessica telling her that she would be returned to Aro's court if she didn't do as she was told, but I don't think she realised even then the potency of the tea just that it was a herbal tea! I think that Edward won't go thru with the torching - knowing how Bella feels and how it will affect them. After all, they've been thru enough, they need a break!

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  14. So I feel like I need to get caught up on this....I told you I would and I will! This is good....Bella will be pissed at him if he does it, but in his defense Jane could have killed his wife....but Bella is going to see it as him taking another human being's life....IDK I guess we will see.....Can't wait!

    Hope you are feeling better soon!

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  15. Holy crap......I guess they found out about the tea!  Eep!!

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  16. Yeah, I have a feeling Isabella may pull another, "What if I had been in the servant's shoes (in this case Jane's)?" on Edward, and then he's going to realize just what he has done. I think Jane may have been fooled by Tanya or Jessica or someone. I feel so bad for Jane right now because I think that she IS going to die; I don't think Edward is going to stop the burning. If anything, I think Isabella may somehow break out of the soldiers' hold and attempt to save her. But, Edward isn't going to stop the execution himself. I just really hope Jessica and Aro get what's coming to them two times over.

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  17. Aro's interest in an heir for Forks is as phony as a politician's interest in any babies other than his own.  If Edward had 4 legit offspring, Aro would contrive another hoop for Edward.  I can see that Edward would be royally pissed at Jane even as she disavowals complicity.  Maybe it will rain - hard.  You know.  Put out the fire.

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  18. Your viewpoint is of interest.  King Aro's wicked agenda is still hidden.             Just before Aro threatend to turn over all non royal women of Forks to his soldiers, he mentioned something about Edward's father. Edward noticed this briefly. Aro has great hatred for Edward's father and resents the son.
    Concerning the burning at the stake, hold Jane in prison a while;  perhaps if Cousins Irina and Tanya were threatened with this, more truths would be
    revealed.

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  19. Yeah tell Edward this. He is so stupid as to believe an heir would have really brought peace and happiness for everybody. Not only he did find the strength and courage to go blindly to another woman for a long time, but he totally ignored his wife in the same span of time causing her pain and humiliation, let alone the loss he caused to his people. How will he redeem hismelf about this? This is ONLY his fault. Yeah Aro is evil. Sure, being a King isn’t an easy task. Evil or not he is being a KING, doing whatever he needs to do  and having more than 1 plan to dominate. Isnt this accurate of time? Power and domination was there for every King back then. You can blame Aro as much as you can blame Edward for what has and is going on.  I dont know, Edward may burn all Volterra, kill Aro and co, still im not sure about his redemption. But im trust Savage will have something up her sleeve and surprise us all.
     

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  20. i think bella going to safe her but get hurt by jumping over the fire, jane will help bella and then they find out that it was tanya that give jane the tea stuff, hopefuly bella will say off with her head even if jane died bella will forgive edward because she undersstande why and a small part of her will be thinking about what if...... puls she know his past. there is only anothe 11 or so chapter and they will be another war with Aro because he needs tocome to an end.  he  savage my suprise us all and edward will save jane himself after aeeing the look in her eyes.

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  21. Crap!  Hope Aro and Jessica are next to her!

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  22. WOW - but most comments are correct. This isn't going to help anything. I expected Edward to go crazy but if he does this to Jane what did he do to Irina and Tanya and don't forget Aro and Jessica.  Can't wait to read the chapter

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  23. I knew it! As soon as she had that first cup of tea, I knew it would keep her from getting pregnant, and then Angela started drinking it was well...

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  24. Does anyone know if Edward heard what Jessica said to Bella last chap?  About dressing her for her marriage bed with Edward?  Does he know the disrespect and cruelty Jessica shows his queen?  Why did he let Jessica touch him and put his hand on her body (stomach)? That in itself was disrespectful to a king and his queen.  If ANYONE should burning at a stake, it should be Jessica.  Edward should have nipped that in the bud AGES ago.  He should NEVER have tolerated that kind of behavior toward his queen.  So if he can punish Jane, Jessica should be JUST as high on his shit list!!!

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