I liked the anonymous note asking for Teaser Tuesday - so here it is! It's not too evil, at least to me. Of course, I go to Thai restaurants and order extra extra spicy, and it's not too hot, either.
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And now the teaser!
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“Did I give you permission to speak, Sir Edward?”
“No…my Queen.”
“Then don’t do so again unless I ask it of you, understood?”
“Yes, my Queen.”
“Down! Now!”
Daring to peek from between my fingers, I watched from the corner of my eye as Edward first held the Queen’s stare, and then slowly dropped to his knees in front of her. He placed his hands – stilled balled into fists – on his thighs and bent his head down. I quickly hid my face again as my heart continued to pound.
“You listen to my words, Edward Anthony Cullen, Lord of Masen, and listen well.” The Queen’s voice was low, and I could hardly hear her words. “This has been a complete and total disaster, and there is one person and one person only who is responsible for it.”
“I think I’ve figured that-”
“SILENCE!”
“Yes, my Queen.” I could barely hear his words to her, but the Queen spoke loud and clear.
“You, Edward,” Esme said. “You are responsible for this."
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Uh oh....Mama's not happy... ;)
Oooo Edward's in trouble!!!
ReplyDeleteGo Queen Esme!!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd then you and Princess Alice have some unfinished business with a couple of court beyoches.... :)
Squee! I knew Esme and Alice would take charge. Go Ladies! Show your stuff!
ReplyDeleteOnce again Edward is in trouble for leaving Bella out of the loop. Forget to tell her about the jealous biatches in the Court.
ReplyDeleteAnd where was Alice??
Hope Alice takes those wenches down.
Those damn bitches need to be seriously takin down. You better be writing a much deserved beheading for Tanya. Just sayin! Looking forward to the update Savage.
ReplyDeleteYes!!! I can't wait!
ReplyDeleteAnd it kind of is Edward's fault for not making sure of who was taking care of Bella, and for not making sure she had someone teaching her the customs and what was expected of her. Esme isn't stupid, she'll get to the bottom of that.
ReplyDeleteAll I want for Christmas is for Tanya & Irina to get theirs. Can it be Christmas again? Pleeeease?
I also really want for edward to know every single thing Tanya said to Bella. Bitch.
Really didn't think I could love anything better than H&D and SB. But this one just might do it. Really do love it!
I got chills!!! Go Esme!!!
ReplyDeleteWhen Momma ain't happy, ain't nobody happy! I hope Edward listens to his Queen & starts doing right by his wife. Those two bitches need to be punished as well. Looking forward to the update as usual.
ReplyDeleteEh...I don't agree. Esme coming in after the fact? Edward may have not been there as he should have, but it is Esme's court, she is the Queen. She left Bella on her own. Alice is just as responsible. And I never like Alice in anyone's story. I find her irritating as fuck! The demon twins are just that, demons. It's to be expected. It is in every story. Naturally, I will be a flutter until Friday to see the outcome, but, I am not liking Esme passing the "total" blame on Edward.
ReplyDeleteOOOOO Edward's gonna get it, lol hopefully Esme is going to be the voice of reason in this matter. thanks Savage
ReplyDeleteEdward wanted to kill that carriage driver for not making his horses stay put, if he doesn't feel the same anger, at the very least towards those two girls that embarrassed Bella even worse, well...i give up on this Edward. Bring in Jacob from other kingdom to rescue Bella :p
ReplyDeleteIf I were Bella, I would ask for a 'demotion' to be a servant again. Maybe a handmaid to Alice or some other kind princess in a neutral kingdom somewhere or just marry her off to some lower rank knight or whatever. Screw Edward's 'promise' and his skills in bed, all the embarassment she had to endure because of his ignorance is just NOT worth it. Sigh...poor Bella, I wager peace and simple life is all she longs for now.
ReplyDeleteDear Princess Savage, thanks for listening to a commoner's plea and posting Teaser Tuesday =)
ReplyDeleteOMG Savage I love your new story, my heart belongs to Sir Edward! I created a photo with my favorite quote from Chapter 8, link below:
ReplyDeletehttp://melbietoast.tumblr.com/post/2708488229/fanfiction-recommendation-i-just-started
Thank you so much for this wonderful story! Can't wait for the next chapter.
xoxo from MelbieToast
Tanya's such a bitch for likely causing some major cockblocking. This, paired with Esme's verbal bitch slap, probably counteracts Edward's "I'll do you after three nights of hot foreplay" promise to Bella (and the readers). Dammit!
ReplyDeleteThis story better have a happy ending...and I don't mean riding off into the sunset...rather the type of happy ending that happens if you pay your masseuse extra...
Can't wait for Friday!
Go Esme! In her own way she is sticking up for Bella! Bella needs someone to stick up for her! Edward needs to wake up! He claims to love her and protect her but he does not give her the tools to deal with everything and truly become part of his world! Open your eyes Edward! Cant wait for the update! Thanks for the teaser!...karen
ReplyDeleteTeaser = Best thing EVER I can just see this making everyone crazy! I love a submissive Bella but I like her to have a bit of a bite every now and then :)
ReplyDeleteLove how Edwards being put in his place! I'm on the edge of my seat to see what he does to Bella, does it hold a bit of violence or will he torture her mentally :O or is it something else! Actually beg you to update soon I'd even get on my knees!!!!! haha
Go Esme Go Esme - I want Tanya and Irina in the stocks - what a pair of biatches! Update soon please *puppy dog eyes*
ReplyDeleteGah! Is it Friday yet?!
ReplyDeleteWhen Momma's not happy... NO ONE is happy!!! You go Queen Esme! Kick some royal, spoiled Edward butt (and what a pretty little butt it is, too)!!!
Oh yeah!
Woo'hoo! Go esme! I don't think Esme's comment us meant literally for the moment though... I think she's referring to the fact that he's pretty much done everything wrong with Bella from the get go (except for maybe the kissing warmups he's been giving her). He basically tells her nothing but expects herbtonknow everything (except for how to gave sex). He's constantly leaving her for hours at s time. Actually, I think the only times they've even been together is at their wedding, the carriage ride to his kingdom (in which he thought she was sleeping), and the three nights the slept in the same bed.
ReplyDeleteAnd regarding the 'demon twins' as someone in an earlier comment dubbed them... I agree with the person that said they should receive some serious punishment. Edward was ready to kill the carriage driver for Bella falling in the mud. If that's the norm, Tanya and Irina's heads should roll (or at the very least, they should be exiled). The embarrassed the future Queen and by doing so, embarrassed prince Edward as well as the immediate royal family. That should be a cardinal sin!!!
Finally.... There's absolutely no reason we have to wait until Friday. By all means, if you feel like spilling the beans a little early on Thursday, be my guest! It's been a crappy weekend I always love to read something you write. Even your angst is acceptable because I know sooner or later, a HEA will be coming!
I hate my fucking iPhone!!! Sorry for all the typos and crap in the above post. Believe it or not, I do have good grammar and know how to spell. But you'ld never know it by the damn auto changes my phone seems to want to make!
ReplyDeleteJust wanted to say, this teaser made me VERY happy. I ranted and raved after the last chapter (Sorry about that! It may have been the longest review I ever left for a fic chapter!)....and this teaser seems to hint that Edward will be held to task. Now, like I said in review: this will be his "test" now, won't it!
ReplyDeleteOMG Savage I love your new story, my heart belongs to Sir Edward! I created a photo with my favorite quote from Chapter 8, link below:
ReplyDeletehttp://melbietoast.tumblr.com/post/2708488229/fanfiction-recommendation-i-just-started
Thank you so much for this wonderful story! Can't wait for the next chapter.
xoxo from MelbieToast
I hate my fucking iPhone!!! Sorry for all the typos and crap in the above post. Believe it or not, I do have good grammar and know how to spell. But you'ld never know it by the damn auto changes my phone seems to want to make!
ReplyDeleteIf I were Bella, I would ask for a 'demotion' to be a servant again. Maybe a handmaid to Alice or some other kind princess in a neutral kingdom somewhere or just marry her off to some lower rank knight or whatever. Screw Edward's 'promise' and his skills in bed, all the embarassment she had to endure because of his ignorance is just NOT worth it. Sigh...poor Bella, I wager peace and simple life is all she longs for now.
ReplyDeleteYes!!! I can't wait!
ReplyDeleteOnce again Edward is in trouble for leaving Bella out of the loop. Forget to tell her about the jealous biatches in the Court.
ReplyDeleteAnd where was Alice??
Hope Alice takes those wenches down.