Unexpected Circumstances Chapter 8 - Tenderly Nurture - posted as well as my New O/S for the banner contest - Same Time Tomorrow, Ms. Swan. I think the betas must be on the same schedule! LOL
The O/S is nothing but smut, so if you are looking for a plot or anything...well, there really isn't much of one. A set up, maybe, but not a plot. It's just smut for smut's sake. Hope you like it!
Now, I shall read a while... :)
Have a great weekend!
The O/S is nothing but smut, so if you are looking for a plot or anything...well, there really isn't much of one. A set up, maybe, but not a plot. It's just smut for smut's sake. Hope you like it!
Now, I shall read a while... :)
Have a great weekend!
just read chap 8 and am disappointed you made edward look so foolish. no one would ever believe bella did that on purpose. he has to know it was done to her. and where is meddeling alice?? we all know she would never let her dress helself so who sent the demon twins??? hope next chappie clears up the nonsense so these two can start trusting each other to be together.really looking forward to next friday now!!!
ReplyDeleteevery other day of the week, i wake disappointed that it's not friday and I dont get an update from you. I just read chapter 8 and I am dying inside. I wish i had a time machine but my flux capacitor is acting up. awesome chapter!!
ReplyDeleteI was a little disappointed Edward automatically thought Bella was up to no good too. Maybe just not knowing each other very well they both are having trust issues. I really wish you had written more though. It didn't seem nearly long enough, and seemed to end at an odd place when the chapter talked earlier about what Edward was going to show Isabella that night. Your chapters really do seem a bit short. It might have something to do with the fact that I LOVE this story, but if you are going to torture us all week waiting for an update, please make them longer. I get the whole cliffhanger thing, you want to keep us hooked, but you didn't have to give us quite such a cliffhanger. There is leaving your reader wanting more, and then torturing them all week. I have another E/B fanfic that only gets updated on Fridays, its killing me!
ReplyDeleteThis has been a great day for me. UC Chapter 8 is up and a new story, Same Time Tomorrow, Ms. Swan. Thank you. Love your stories. P.S. Please kill Tanya and Irina. :)
ReplyDeletePlease give Bella a brain! Even half of one will suffice. I'm in SUPERLOVE with this story, but why oh why must Bella be such a dimwit?
ReplyDeleteSo now I feel bad for caling Bella a dimwit. Apparently I'm quite distressed about the Tanya/dress fiasco! I apologize, and I hope Edward isn't as mad at her as I was!
ReplyDeletei dont like the fact that people are saying that they're disappointed in chap8, although it was a sad ending to the chapter, it was a great cilffie. great for making sure that were all going to come back next week but sucky for all of us who dont know how your evil genius mind works... im hoping that you have this story outlined because if i have to wait for a massive writers block to be pushed aside i just might weep. is it too much to ask that chap 9 is up before the weekend? a girl can only dream
ReplyDeleteand STTMS was hot... im going to vote right now... i would love for it to be continued eventually. maybe after UC because waiting for 2 stories by the same writer is nerve-wracking sometimes. a just-for-smuts-sake chapter here and now would be terrific though (im just suggesting). i only hope that if you do its not too similar to 'The Harder They Fall' by Ironic Twist (great fic rec, btw.. do you have anymore?)
if you have read all of this i feel special :)
im raising my cup if mead to you, Savage!
I was a little disappointed Edward automatically thought Bella was up to no good too. Maybe just not knowing each other very well they both are having trust issues. I really wish you had written more though. It didn't seem nearly long enough, and seemed to end at an odd place when the chapter talked earlier about what Edward was going to show Isabella that night. Your chapters really do seem a bit short. It might have something to do with the fact that I LOVE this story, but if you are going to torture us all week waiting for an update, please make them longer. I get the whole cliffhanger thing, you want to keep us hooked, but you didn't have to give us quite such a cliffhanger. There is leaving your reader wanting more, and then torturing them all week. I have another E/B fanfic that only gets updated on Fridays, its killing me!
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