11.17.2010

Mid-Week Sneak Peek - Surviving Bella Chap 16

Chapter 16 is off to the beta, so it shouldn't be long now. Then just one more full chapter and epilogue to go! Phew!

Here's your teaser!

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Her hand traces down the edge of my jaw, and I lean into the sensation. When I open my eyes, she is smiling up at me, but it’s not from happiness. Her smile is…sad? She shakes her head slowly.

“It’s all right” she tells me. “I know you would rather stay here.”

She is walking away from me, down the beach and to a small motorboat anchored in the water. Emmett and Carlisle are there, waiting for her. They help her on board, telling her she has to be careful in her condition…

I take a few steps down the beach, intending to go after her, but the engine has started, and they’re leaving me behind…

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12 comments:

  1. WHAT????????????????????????????????????????????Emmett AND Carlise????? And Bella, what condition, is she pregnant???!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG
    I am dying here!! no fair!!! they left him behind?????

    seriously, I am going to sue you if i die of a heart attack in the next 30 minutes. my lawyer will contact yours. heheh!!!! they LEFT HIM?????????????????

    Please, i am beggging you for a hea. begging you for one. we let boobward have a not so happy ending but not shipward. he deserves it all and then some. please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. hoping he is just dreaming!!! thanks for the teaser..Pam B.

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  3. IT'S A DREAM! IT'S A DREAM! IT'S ONLY A DREAM!!!
    PLEASE!!!

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  4. oh my! this is another one of Edward's nightmares... 'her condition' ... didn't Edward get snipped about the whole Tanya heartbreak?! Ugh! Enquiring minds want to know!!! :)

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  5. What! wait did we just skip a bunch of time.... I thought edward had a VAS? Bella, I guess her shot would have worn off by now... DREAM? Please dont seperate them.... UGG need this update soon!

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  6. I say it's a dream/nightmare. It still makes me sad though that his sense of unworthiness is so deeply rooted in who he is...last chapter kinda broke my heart.

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  7. OMG, you're killing me here! Is it a dream? Is it real? Are they in the matrix? I hope this chapter gets back from your beta real fast :-) I'm dying to find out what it is all about.

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  8. OMG! It better be a damn dream! or i am taking the next flight to whatever island they are in and crack her head up lol kiddin but it better be a dream

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  9. biblepam@yahoo.comJuly 9, 2011 at 11:09 PM

    hoping he is just dreaming!!! thanks for the teaser..Pam B.

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