tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post7285502318623140344..comments2024-03-07T11:48:17.032-05:00Comments on Shay Savage: Teaser Tuesday! UC Chapter 25Savagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01540836633129138903noreply@blogger.comBlogger102125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-18158337797572204832011-07-12T17:53:05.778-04:002011-07-12T17:53:05.778-04:00Hello Hope your vacation was fabulous sounded like...Hello Hope your vacation was fabulous sounded like it was. I found your story recently and couldn't stop reading at work,at home, 2 AM. (by the way u are some writer really,really crazy great. When he left to go screw sorry crass but it is what it is her best freaken friend UGH! Please let it not be so I like the mix-up but really sleeping with her friend I'm still hoping the reason is that freaken tea Jane gives her is preventing her from getting preggers. So looking forward o and update to see where u will go. I just finished Surviving Bella again great writing it just seemed to cut off at a point of huh what happens like one of those movies that all of a sudden the credits come on and your like WTF what happens....can I just say I'm luving you a little bit ...LilyLilynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-81169699334520978782011-07-09T23:10:13.352-04:002011-07-09T23:10:13.352-04:00I was excited to read your teaser... but now, I am...I was excited to read your teaser... but now, I am not so sure. I am not sure if I want to read the next chapter. Of course I will still love your story. I would just have to wait. That is my initial plan, but I guess I can not help myself if I'm too curious to see how this one goes. :-)ArlynGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08246490732532651710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-33850726581318618502011-07-09T23:10:12.661-04:002011-07-09T23:10:12.661-04:00I want to cry. Seriously, big, heaving, gut-wrenc...I want to cry. Seriously, big, heaving, gut-wrenching sobs. I feel so bad for Angela. And Bella. Hell, I even feel bad for Edward to a point. I won't flounce if he sleeps with Angela (or someone other than Bella), but I may have to wait and finish it when it's complete to limit the heart fail to a single day. :)Mistynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-13209913172767168362011-07-09T23:10:12.444-04:002011-07-09T23:10:12.444-04:00You people gotta be kidding me. Now you are happy ...You people gotta be kidding me. Now you are happy that Bella will love angelas'kids and will raise them? and that makes you feel better? How can they take angela's kids from her? She bears children and she doesnt raise them? And we are not speakig 1 child here, but children ffs? This is double fucked up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-77720331803336804272011-07-09T23:10:12.174-04:002011-07-09T23:10:12.174-04:00Love this teaser . You are an amazing author and I...Love this teaser . You are an amazing author and I'm completely addicted to ALL your fics!! UC is a heartstopping read, can't wait to find out what happens next!fran.richards50http://www.blogger.com/profile/16802867097206937935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-14204728691581218482011-07-09T23:10:11.983-04:002011-07-09T23:10:11.983-04:00Me too. Id rather see Edward takes Jessica, and be...Me too. Id rather see Edward takes Jessica, and be forced to marry her, than sleep with angela, who is somebody he likes, and wont be too hard to take her and make her pregnant. i want Edward to suffer for puting bella in such position. whats better than losing Bella and being forced to live with a bitch like Jessica? He can let Bella free for all that matters...what a fuckery. so Bella waits every night for her husband to finish with Angela, then take Bella to bed and make love to her? Nah, no matter how much Bella and angela love each other, somebody is going to get hurt, in this case is Bella.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-43255008517752990382011-07-09T23:10:11.740-04:002011-07-09T23:10:11.740-04:00I'm also thinking there is more to the tea the...I'm also thinking there is more to the tea then we know....Kaitlinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08003190557134058225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-44863579775928059062011-07-09T23:10:11.503-04:002011-07-09T23:10:11.503-04:00I must say that i adore this story but i'm slo...I must say that i adore this story but i'm slowy dying with all thie angst!!!!!!!!!!can't they have one moment of peace.Their marriage will never be the same if he sleeps with angela,it is simply not right savage!!I want to terminate both bitches JANE and JESSICA.poor bella dying to give her love a child and unable to,the hurt,disappointment,the feeling of being a failure.she is so kind to everyone why must she always suffer???<br>please make them realise the real source of their infertility and after killing the manipulative bitches be somewhat happy,let the angst be in the background not in their relationship,it's the only sacred thing left!!!<br>please do your best to post before you go on vacation<br>we love you all!!!!!!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-64076574469401907012011-07-09T23:10:11.280-04:002011-07-09T23:10:11.280-04:00Can't Edward lie and say he uses Angela that w...Can't Edward lie and say he uses Angela that way? 'Oh! Theres no need anymore, Isabella's pregnant!' I don't know I'm still dying over last chapter...sadly the defibrillator did not work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-42116081924896199562011-07-09T23:10:11.075-04:002011-07-09T23:10:11.075-04:00Why is it always the woman???? Maybe Sir Edward do...Why is it always the woman???? Maybe Sir Edward don't have any swimmers. This is so hard he does nothing but keep hurting her one day at at time and to raise another woman child a lot to stomach for a dear sweet Bella. All the transgression stacking up in a neat stack. How much more can she be expected to take from him. Oh get rid of the handmaid and her tea if not Edward lacking it is the tea!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-16932253588228886342011-07-09T23:10:10.762-04:002011-07-09T23:10:10.762-04:00It's just wrong, on so many levels... in the e...It's just wrong, on so many levels... in the end, It is Edward's choice, and I am disgusted in him for this... He was easily adopted by Carlisle and Esme, could he not take a similiar route... I adore the story, but I can't really stomach him sleeping with Angela... I think Princess Jessica would be a better choice, set Bella free and then at least I would know he would pay for his choice forever... Poor Bella, OMG...babbleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13065221167475410877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-86968004360674186692011-07-09T23:10:10.517-04:002011-07-09T23:10:10.517-04:00I can't remember a story ever getting to me th...I can't remember a story ever getting to me this much. It is mad, you updated a week ago and all I could think about was it. I went from toying with the idea of not reading it until you had finished, to reading it and back again. Having read this teaser I don't know whether I can handle the angst! You are such an incredible writer and the angst you are able to make your readers feel is incredible. I have read all your other stories and I am going to stick with you and read each chapter because I have faith in you and your happy ever after endings. I know it will take a lot more angst to get there but I know *I hope* that we will get there. Have a lovely holiday and enjoy the sunshine.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-15343345264270987542011-07-09T23:10:10.355-04:002011-07-09T23:10:10.355-04:00You're killing me here!! And that last senten...You're killing me here!! And that last sentence....<br><br>I think I'm going to cry!!soozyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12396880028577199809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-39075573875915252942011-07-09T23:10:10.164-04:002011-07-09T23:10:10.164-04:00OMFG I want to rip someone's head off...... no...OMFG I want to rip someone's head off...... not yours Savage, don't worry, I want to rip Edward's head because of the pain he is making Bella feel, I want to rip Bella's head because for what I read she isn't even angry, I want to rip Aro/Jessica's head b/c they are shit, and I want to rip Carlisle/Esme's head b/c they should be on Bella´s side.<br>Bottom line is, I have murder tendencies right now!!!!!<br>*Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*<br>Can't wait for the chapter, even if I know it will be angsty and it will have lots to take in!Lolypop82http://www.blogger.com/profile/01221061267878626418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-1839929781858608752011-07-09T23:10:09.878-04:002011-07-09T23:10:09.878-04:00I can't believe this. I can't believe he&#...I can't believe this. I can't believe he'd hurt Bella like that. He knows how much she wants to get pregnant and how much she likes Angela. I can't believe he'd do that to her. And I can't believe that Bella will accept that just so she won't loose him. I mean, he's going to take her biggest dream and make it happen with somebody else and she's just going to put her head down and be ok with it? He's going to sleep with someone else just because Bella can't give him what he wants and that's the worst kind of betrayal. <br>She can't accept that. She's already accpeted too much! She got married with a man she'd never seen before! She can't keep accepting everything that happens to her, she has to stand up for herself! She has to stop being a scary little girl that says "yes sir" all the time and fight for what she wants! She has to make them listen to her! This is important to her, she dreamt about having his babies and now she'll have to raise the ones he has with another woman?! That will destroy her. I know it'd destroy me.<br>I'm sorry. I love all your stories and I've loved this one since ch 1, but if he does this, if Bella just accept this then I can't read this story anymore.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-58562310541492697812011-07-09T23:10:09.573-04:002011-07-09T23:10:09.573-04:00what are you people saying? If edward is sterile t...what are you people saying? If edward is sterile this story is over. He will betray his wife for nothing and he will lose everything becase he would never have his heir. That wouldnt make sense except it will further hurt Bella and destroy Edward!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-70250299599713068112011-07-09T23:10:09.313-04:002011-07-09T23:10:09.313-04:00Meant "throw" oops!Meant "throw" oops!jackie84http://www.blogger.com/profile/12484933455649105737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-15143333631977766382011-07-09T23:10:09.112-04:002011-07-09T23:10:09.112-04:00I think that Angela will work out the nasty deeds ...I think that Angela will work out the nasty deeds of Jessica and together with Jayne ( who Bella stopped from being continually raped)will 'save the day'!!fran.richards50http://www.blogger.com/profile/16802867097206937935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-58565266101467235342011-07-09T23:10:08.901-04:002011-07-09T23:10:08.901-04:00Savage, I've always felt that with time as we ...Savage, I've always felt that with time as we see Bella's confidence grow we would see her strength of character come thru! I don't have any issues with your writings sofar, even with the 'heart in mouth' moments I can't wait to read what happens next!! For every criticism you get, you gain 2 new fans cause I certainly spread the word on Facebook !!fran.richards50http://www.blogger.com/profile/16802867097206937935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-13202408275450942222011-07-09T23:10:08.542-04:002011-07-09T23:10:08.542-04:00For the record, I know what "P.S." stand...For the record, I know what "P.S." stands for...I'd have been delighted to sign my note and not post anonymously, but I apparently can't do that without signing onto one of these platforms (such as gmail) that don't appear to be available outside the U.S. ...Or if it *is* available, it's beyond my limited technical abilities to make it work. Anyway, you likely know who I am, I sent you a review or a PM to the same effect when 24 posted. I choose not to add to the drama here by engaging in a wide-spectrum internet/blog debate everyone and anyone can jump on into (I've seen enough of that lately), but I'd be more than happy to discuss with you over FFn or e-mail. Perhaps we could come to an intelligent meeting of the minds, or agreement to disagree. (If you're interested, advise and I'll PM again.)<br><br>I'll say one thing for you, my dear - you know how to stir things up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-31385026557493237692011-07-09T23:10:08.339-04:002011-07-09T23:10:08.339-04:00Stop drinking the tea!!!!Stop drinking the tea!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-47417773923806978392011-07-09T23:10:08.159-04:002011-07-09T23:10:08.159-04:00(part 3)So… being that the ExB relationship is why...(part 3)<br><br>So… being that the ExB relationship is why I read fic at all, if this happens with Angela and the ExB relationship is pretty much killed (or SHOULD be killed, if you’re at all realistic about human nature), that is where I will absolutely, definitely get off this train. There will be no reason for me to read it, because I don’t read angst for angst’s sake – I just don’t enjoy it. I may as well jam sharp objects under my fingernails. And I don’t think that should be considered as a “threat”, either. No one saying they’re flouncing or thinking about flouncing should be considered a “threat” – it’s an explanation as to why a person ceases to be a member of your reading audience. Wouldn’t you rather know *why* you’re losing readers, rather than having them just slink away quietly? It’s as much a comment as any other kind of review. And all authors (and readers) on FFn need to remember, the “Review” button is not a “Compliments Only” button. If you post your writing publicly, you expose yourself to and implicitly agree to accept comments both positive AND negative. Besides, in my view, it takes more balls to send a negative review, since so few people around here seem to do it. <br><br>(Oh, and since you asked expressly, I’m sorry, but I don’t think the dress ribbon analogy worked very well. For one thing, I was like Edward initially, going, “HUH? What does that have to do with anything?” But for another, I thought it rather trivialized what is a pretty grave and ugly situation. Having someone help you with your buttons is hardly even in the same ballpark as having to let someone fuck your husband. I don’t think it’s even the same sport, much less the same ballpark.) <br><br>Last of all, I want to try and explain my very visceral reaction(s) to what you've been setting up, here. I think it's what many other readers feel, too, even if they don't articulate it quite this way.<br><br>As alluded to above, the reason many of us read Twilight and now read Twilight fan fiction is the ExB relationship. It's a story of great love, two people meant to be, ALWAYS meant to be, only for each other. There's something "sacred", for lack of a better word, about the relationship, and readers have certain expectations about how that relationship will go. One of the expectations is that they'll end up together, HEA. Another of the expectations is that they won't be fucking other people. As readers, we're of course willing to watch them work their way through various obstacles - E voluntarily leaving B for whatever reason, E and B being separated by circumstances involving their jobs, families, whatever - and so forth. But a hard limit in pretty much EACH AND EVERY story is the notion of either E or B being with someone else, however temporary. Look at EP. E and B were separated for a hell of a long time, for various reasons, but NEITHER was dating/fucking other people in the interim. If that had happened, I think you would have seen some incredibly angry reactions. Look at MotU. E fucked up at the end with his ridiculous reaction to B's pregnancy, but he didn't actually go running back to Mrs. Pedophile Pervert to fuck her. If he had, that story would have been utterly ruined, and again would have generated incredibly angry reactions. You didn’t even do it in CBWR – E and B were separated for a long time while he was in jail at the end, and she wasn’t dating other people in the interim, even though it would have been more than understandable if she had. <br><br>(to be continued...)Scooterstalehttp://www.fanfiction.net/~scooterstalenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-80308862351502214772011-07-09T23:10:07.974-04:002011-07-09T23:10:07.974-04:00how about thisthe bad jane's tea comes up, as ...how about this<br>the bad jane's tea comes up, as well as his espionage job for Aro. But when it does, Angela will already be pregnant. With all discovered, Edward is forced to go to war even without waiting to see his heir. What he does not know is that he leaves behind not only Angela, but Bella pregnant. War is terrible, but they win and regain the lost things and more. When Edward returns, it is time for Angela's baby was born. And he learns that Bella will make the delivery, and also discovers that she is finally pregnant. Things get complicated, Angela dies after the birth of the baby, who is a boy. After, Bella gives birth to a beautiful little girl ..<br>@CamilaLomboneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-31375156610778139272011-07-05T15:42:57.751-04:002011-07-05T15:42:57.751-04:00Wow!Scooterstale! Very well written....very long ...Wow!Scooterstale! Very well written....very long winded but I think you needed that in order to explain everything. I liked that you did not insult Savage even though you did not agree with the way the story was going. Not all B&E stories have a happy ending...believe me I have read some where I knew what was going to happen in the last chapter and I just could not read it....like Edward died in one of them and I told the writer...sorry but I can't do it. I was sick to my stomach and thought about it alot even though I didn't read it but I knew.... Yes we do get wrapped up in these stories don't we. To a point where I keep checking for updates during work instead of working...oh well. I definately see your point and appreciate you writing it. I think after reading all of Savage's stories, that if there were not a HEA she would have told us in the summary. I do feel the same as you as far as if he does fuck Angela he would definately be fucking Bella because of it...yeah had to use the word because it would be that vulgar...she would not get over it and it would totally mess up their relationship. I feel that if the characters didn't react that way, then they would not be human. What she shows on the outside may be one thing...but on the inside, she would be a freak if it did not affect her and how she feels about Edward and Angela. I hope the next chapter eases our stress levels a little bit and not have to wait for a few more chapters before being able to breathe again.<br />thankslee21761http://hotmail.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4788274610340361132.post-41269079544433337442011-07-05T15:39:41.110-04:002011-07-05T15:39:41.110-04:00how about this
the bad jane's tea comes up, as...how about this<br />the bad jane's tea comes up, as well as his espionage job for Aro. But when it does, Angela will already be pregnant. With all discovered, Edward is forced to go to war even without waiting to see his heir. What he does not know is that he leaves behind not only Angela, but Bella pregnant. War is terrible, but they win and regain the lost things and more. When Edward returns, it is time for Angela's baby was born. And he learns that Bella will make the delivery, and also discovers that she is finally pregnant. Things get complicated, Angela dies after the birth of the baby, who is a boy. After, Bella gives birth to a beautiful little girl ..<br />@CamilaLomboneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com